“Love Finale”


Feeling regret

About this thing we had;

This thing

That used to be passionate,

Used to…

Feel incomparable.

Feeling regret

About the thing we shared;

The thing

That used to be ecstasy,

Used to…

Feel incredible.

Feeling regret

About the thing we nurtured;

This thing

That used to be unending,

Used to…

Feel resplendent.

Feeling regret

About the thing we cherished;

The thing

That used to be unrehearsed,

Used to…

Feel exclusive.

Feeling no regret

About the thing we smothered;

The thing

That used to be our love,

Used to…

Feel like suffocation.

Copyright Β© 2012-2014 – Melissa Kinnel [All Rights Reserved]

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20 thoughts on ““Love Finale”

  1. You must have been reading my mind! Thanks…

  2. rungnatee

    Awesome!

  3. Beautiful, this thing you wrote πŸ™‚

  4. Very good. Very good. Very good. πŸ™‚

    Thank you for touching our heartstrings with your talent.

  5. I think I know that thing

  6. tammy theriault

    i really like the poem, especially going from regret to no regret is poweful. new follower here, hi!!

  7. That was sad!

  8. oh wow, what a poignant poem.

  9. crayyy3

    Emotions were tingling…the words were felt! Powerful!

  10. Your poem was beautifully written, and every word in every line were expressed so clearly…you are talented dear sister….beautifully talented…its a blessing to ready your spirits heart!

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